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cutietoty92 29-06-2008 09:01 PM

A poem In English----> I'm the writer
 
i was in a beutiful dream
where i didn't want to wake up
there was a river of love
there was a rain of joy
but all of this was just a dream
and suddenly i heard a loud scream
scaring me and shouting "stop"
i tried to challenge and complete
but the scream became louder shouting " stop"
i had the strength to go on
and my lover decided to give up
Now i am so weak , but i will stand up
i will face that life , i will kill the dream

cutietoty92 29-06-2008 09:03 PM

what do you think , girls

i am the writer .. may u check grammer and spelling

muslimaaaa 30-06-2008 09:43 PM

thank you cutietoty92 :love0072:


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