شعر من تأليفى (pray)

[muslimaaaa]

pray

pray and don't say
tomorrow i will pray
and remmember tomorrow could be your day
so what are you going to say
to Allah in that day
you are not created for fun
and from Allah you could never run
to where you will go
and Allah who created you
is seeing what you do
he gave you what you love
and you even could laugh
when you do what he hate
and he never be away
so now what you could say
let your head down
and don't look around
this world is soo small
like a small hole
in a miniute could be closed
and to found your self in another world

المصدر: منتديات بنات دوت كوم

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auv lk jHgdtn (pray)

الموضوع الأصلي : شعر من تأليفى (pray) || القسم : صندوق ذكرياتـــنــا .. || المصدر : منتديات بنات دوت كوم || كاتبة الموضوع : muslimaaaa

[hidayamina]

You are a very good poet
your poem is very nice
take care of your capacities
but there was a small mistake
could refer to the past not to the future
and tomorrow is the future
thanks a lot
-hidaya-

[muslimaaaa]

thank you sister hidayamina for your reply but i couldn't understand what you mean?? this poem is on the future i don't mean tomorrow tomorrow i mean by it the future as tomorrow is used in the future thank you alot

[White ♥ Heart]

o h Allah !
it's imazing ... it tuched my heart Heart.. really .. I can't explain to you ..
thank yyou soooo much .. I hope we still in the Islam way ..

[وردة السلام]

شكرا على الشعر الحلو
,,سلام,,

[وردة السلام]

شكرا على الموضوع الحلو
,,سلا,,

[muslimaaaa]

جزاكم الله كل الخير White ♥ Heart ,وردة السلام على الردود الحلوه والله اسعدنى ردودكم كثيرا" الله يسعدكم دنيا و اخره

[وردة السلام]

ممكن اختي تجيبي نسخة بالعربي
,,سلام,,

[muslimaaaa]

ممكن طبعا" يا وردة السلام

صلى و لا تقول غدا" سوف اصلى
و تذكر ان غدا" يمكن ان يكون يومك (اعنى الموت)
فما الذى ستقوله لله فى هذا اليوم
انت لست مخلوق للهو و من الله لايمكن تهرب
الى اين ستذهب و الله الذى خلقك يرى ما تفعل
هو اعطاك ما تحب و مع ذلك يمكنك الضحك عندما تفعل ما يكره
و هو ابدا" لا يكون بعيد
فالان ماذا ستقول
اخفض رأ سك الى الاسفل
و لا تنظر حولك
هذا العالم صغير جدا"
مثل حفره صغيره
فى لحظه يمكن ان تغلق و تجد نفسك فى عالم اخر

[مغادرة بصمت]

nice poem...

Thank you...